Hi: Here's some very minor nits (RFC editor would correct):
1. s/feasable/feasible/ 2. s/section Section 2.6./Section 2.6./ 3. s/connectivity.Disabling/connectivity. Disabling/ 4. s/it has lead to nodes/it has led to nodes/ 5. s/formated/formatted/ 6. s/occurences/occurrences/ 7. s/ bypassed by an hostile party/ bypassed by a hostile party/ 8. s/be be/be/ 9. s/explicitely/explicitly/ 10. s/to identifity the interface/ to identify the interface/ 11. s/seperation/separation/ 12. s/hardened agains miscreant/hardened against miscreant/ 13. s/exception of an handful/exception of a handful/ Perhaps I missed it, but the document doesn't mention anything about using a random link-layer address (other than in the context of generating IPv6 addresses). Perhaps that's OK as this is an IPv6 document and that really is a separate link-layer security issue -- and you do have to draw the line somewhere otherwise it will never get done. In all the document does look very good and hopefully can move to WGLC soon! - Bernie _______________________________________________ OPSEC mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsec
