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*Innovating the Change * *Does not sound right... perhaps it should be Innovating Change ?* What is MOSC ? MOSC is an event where you can learn how to maximize value from Open Source software for your organization, and meet world class speakers from around the world. Now is the time for Innovating the Change! Why you should Attend ? MOSC provides exposure and knowledge on the importance of OSS, share amongst the open source community on new directions and latest innovations, share and exchange views, ideas, and tools on the latest trends and issues of OSS. *Sounds confused - maybe you should just list 3 or 5 specifics eg* - *Realising cost benefits* - *Making your application scalable to millions * - *Securing your implementation* - *Rapid application development and frameworks * - *Technologies, innovations, trends, challenges and lemons* *Looking at past conferences, security has been a good crowd puller, the php shootout on framework crowd was also good. cloud computing is popular now coz people want to know how to easily scale to millions, trends etc is so-so lah... but still needed*.* i think these are the reasons that an ict administrator / office / technician would need so that their boss will approve the rm500 ticket. * *Who Should Attend ? * Open Source developers, communities, enterprenuers, inventors, evangelist, researchers, strategist Business executives from local and multi-national companies Government officers Students, general public For the slideshow on get your seats now... it may be better to show filled audiences. using an image of empty seats... well, it does not make me want to buy a ticket (except for maybe for kesian..) Add the date in the content body and the countdown.. at the moment it is in the images - search engines will find it hard to read the date from the image Need to have page on past conferences : this is important for sponsors. I wonder if adding a diaspora network be attractive to create a buzz ? On Sun, Apr 17, 2011 at 1:28 PM, Harisfazillah Jamel < [email protected]> wrote: > Thanks. Sedang dibincangkan dalam MOSC2011 list. Ada cadangan > penggunaan extension. > > Kami akan update. > > On Sun, Apr 17, 2011 at 12:42 PM, Ahmad Amran <[email protected]> wrote: > > Guna iphone , tak dapat convert ke full version. Mungkin cookie problem? > > > > Sent from my phone > > > > -- > To unsubscribe from and detail about this group > http://portal.mosc.my/osdc-my-mailing-list-information > > MOSC2011 http://fb.me/mosc2011 and http://portal.mosc.my/ > -- To unsubscribe from and detail about this group http://portal.mosc.my/osdc-my-mailing-list-information MOSC2011 http://fb.me/mosc2011 and http://portal.mosc.my/
