Hi Paul,

Please review and comment, thanks.

Looks great to me. Only thing I'd add, in the sentence:

The global community is constantly improving OSG by contributing enhancements, bug fixes, testing, and using it daily in numerous commercial and academic application software projects.

I would add ", open source" between "commercial" and "and academic application software projects." But that's just for completeness.

J-S
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