+1 for Wesley's nits too
Sean Kennedy
OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web --
http://open-services.net/
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/
There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor
Hugo
From: Wesley Coelho <[email protected]>
To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA,
[email protected],
Date: 12/10/16 07:42 PM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Looking good!
A few minor nits to consider:
* Consider dropping the ??? ellipsis after ?Linked Lifecycle Data?
* Consider making Linked Lifecycle Data the same blue color as ?the Next
Generation??. Not sure but it might even work to reverse the heading and
subheading, e.g.:
Linked Lifecycle Data:
The Next Generation of Collaboration
* The upper and lower case should be consistent in ?Tool Integration and
Interoperability??. E.g. all title-cased or all lower case like a sentence:
Tool integration and interoperability based on open and standard Internet
technologies
* Consider dropping the word ?Different?
* Consider adding bullets for the last two points.
* Is the OSLC logo at the top left a vector graphic? A higher res image or
vector might make it look better, especially when printed.
Just my 2 cents.
+1 for of Sean?s suggestions.
Wesley
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Tasktop Technologies
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From: Oslc-Communications [mailto:
[email protected]] On Behalf Of Sean Kennedy
Sent: October-16-12 6:47 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
It looks a lot cleaner to me - very good.
A few thoughts:
1. I think it would be better to put the whole Lyo logo (which includes the
OSLC logo) instead of just the lion's head.
2. Use bold instead of italics to bring focus to "OSLC Core" and "OSLC
domain workgroups".
3. I prefer lower case for URLs, i.e. open-services.net (but it doesn't
bother me that much!)
Sean Kennedy
OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web --
http://open-services.net/
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/
There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor
Hugo
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From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected]>
To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA, <[email protected]
>,
Date: 12/10/14 07:21 PM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Hi all,
I?ve submitted an updated version based your feedback and Sean updates.
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/
Please send me your feedback by Wednesday 17th Oct. 2012.
Best Regards,
Parham Vasaiely
Project Manager R&D
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Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering
From: Oslc-Communications [
mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Sean
Kennedy
Sent: Friday, October 05, 2012 2:08 PM
To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Thanks for uploading to the wiki, I have made a few modifications that you
can find here:
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/File:OSLC_Flyer1_A5-sk.docx/
(I also linked to this update from the wiki page)
Here are some other things I think we should try to work into the flyer:
1. Eclipse Lyo 1.0: that it speeds and simplifies your OSLC implementations
+ what it provides
2. W3C LDP WG: that it is standardizing part of OSLC Core
Sean Kennedy
OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web --
http://open-services.net/
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/
There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor
Hugo
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From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected]>
To: "Robert W Myers" <[email protected]>, Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA,
Cc: <[email protected]>, "Oslc-Communications" <
[email protected]>
Date: 12/10/05 04:35 AM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Hi,
Thanks for the feedback. Here the updated version.
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/
If this is okay for a first version I?ll release it for printing.
Best Regards,
Parham Vasaiely
Project Manager R&D
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EADS Innovation Works UK
Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering
From: Robert W Myers [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Thursday, October 04, 2012 9:52 PM
To: Sean Kennedy
Cc: [email protected]; Oslc-Communications; Vasaiely,
Parham
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Hi,
I agree with Sean about the header slogan.
I prefer the one I've attached because it presents a graphic first rather
than words.
Bob
From: Sean Kennedy <[email protected]>
To: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected]>,
Cc: [email protected]
Date: 10/04/2012 03:53 PM
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Sent by: "Oslc-Communications" <
[email protected]>
I can't yet choose between the two, but I do think we should change the
header slogan to be:
"Lifecycle integration inspired by the web"
(since that is what's on the website now)
I'll noodle on the differences (and potential other content) a bit more and
reply again.
Sean Kennedy
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OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web --
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Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/
There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor
Hugo
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From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>,
Date: 12/10/04 03:04 PM
Subject: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)
Sent by: "Oslc-Communications" <
[email protected]>
Hi all,
Please find attached two different flyers for two big events in Oct. 2012.
The content is quite similar but the structure is a bit different.
The flyer is in DIN A5 format.
Please tell me by beginning of end week which one you prefer. Thanks!
Kind Regards,
Parham Vasaiely
Project Manager R&D
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