Hi all,
Thanks a lot for your comments. Somehow I didn't receive Wesley's comments over the mailing list. I hope no other mail has been lost as well. Sean, can you please send me the OSLC logo in a higher resolution, as well as the Lyo one? I'll upload a new version with all your comments after adding the better quality logos. Best Regards, Parham Vasaiely Project Manager R&D ------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------- EADS Innovation Works UK Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering From: Oslc-Communications [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Sean Kennedy Sent: Wednesday, October 17, 2012 1:28 AM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) +1 for Wesley's nits Sean Kennedy ________________________________ OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/> There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor Hugo Wesley Coelho ---2012/10/16 07:42:24 PM---Looking good! A few minor nits to consider: From: Wesley Coelho <[email protected]> To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA, [email protected], Date: 12/10/16 07:42 PM Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) ________________________________ Looking good! A few minor nits to consider: * Consider dropping the "..." ellipsis after "Linked Lifecycle Data" * Consider making Linked Lifecycle Data the same blue color as "the Next Generation...". Not sure but it might even work to reverse the heading and subheading, e.g.: Linked Lifecycle Data: The Next Generation of Collaboration * The upper and lower case should be consistent in "Tool Integration and Interoperability...". E.g. all title-cased or all lower case like a sentence: Tool integration and interoperability based on open and standard Internet technologies * Consider dropping the word "Different" * Consider adding bullets for the last two points. * Is the OSLC logo at the top left a vector graphic? A higher res image or vector might make it look better, especially when printed. Just my 2 cents. +1 for of Sean's suggestions. Wesley -- Wesley Coelho Director, Business Development Tasktop Technologies +1 778 588 6896 Ext. 112 From: Oslc-Communications [mailto: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> ] On Behalf Of Sean Kennedy Sent: October-16-12 6:47 AM To: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) It looks a lot cleaner to me - very good. A few thoughts: 1. I think it would be better to put the whole Lyo logo (which includes the OSLC logo) instead of just the lion's head. 2. Use bold instead of italics to bring focus to "OSLC Core" and "OSLC domain workgroups". 3. I prefer lower case for URLs, i.e. open-services.net <http://open-services.net/> (but it doesn't bother me that much!) Sean Kennedy ________________________________ OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/> There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor Hugo "Vasaiely, Parham" ---2012/10/14 07:21:50 PM---Hi all, From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA, < [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >, Date: 12/10/14 07:21 PM Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) ________________________________ Hi all, I've submitted an updated version based your feedback and Sean updates. http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/ <http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/> Please send me your feedback by Wednesday 17th Oct. 2012. Best Regards, Parham Vasaiely Project Manager R&D ------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------- EADS Innovation Works UK Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering From: Oslc-Communications [ mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> ] On Behalf Of Sean Kennedy Sent: Friday, October 05, 2012 2:08 PM To: [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) Thanks for uploading to the wiki, I have made a few modifications that you can find here: http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/File:OSLC_Flyer1_A5-sk.docx / <http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/File:OSLC_Flyer1_A5-sk.doc x/> (I also linked to this update from the wiki page) Here are some other things I think we should try to work into the flyer: 1. Eclipse Lyo 1.0: that it speeds and simplifies your OSLC implementations + what it provides 2. W3C LDP WG: that it is standardizing part of OSLC Core Sean Kennedy ________________________________ OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/> There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. -- Victor Hugo "Vasaiely, Parham" ---2012/10/05 04:35:39 AM---Hi, From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > To: "Robert W Myers" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >, Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA, Cc: <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >, "Oslc-Communications" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > Date: 12/10/05 04:35 AM Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) ________________________________ Hi, Thanks for the feedback. Here the updated version. http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/ <http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/> If this is okay for a first version I'll release it for printing. Best Regards, Parham Vasaiely Project Manager R&D ------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------- EADS Innovation Works UK Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering
