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Section 8 answers my concern about security, although the section will need a
formal schema.  AFAIC this draft is ready to be submitted to the IESG.

I also reviewed the other changes and noticed that most of the nits I
suggested were not applied.  In addition I noticed that some references need
an update:

I-D.zheng-p2psip-diagnose
I-D.ietf-behave-rfc3489bis
I-D.ietf-mmusic-ice

and perhaps more.

Globally the whole document still feel like it needs some editing.

On 02/14/2013 01:30 PM, Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano wrote:
> Hi folks,
> 
> Please review the doc, as several changes have been made.  If you believe
> it's ready to go, please affirmatively say so. If you believe we need to do
> more review, please say that.
> 
> If you find problems, of course we want to hear them.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Brian & Carlos
> 
> On Mon, 2013-02-04 at 09:00 +0000, Songhaibin (A) wrote:
>> Hi guys,
>> 
>> We have made quite a few changes to the p2psip diagnostics draft, now we
>> believe it has solved the comments from the WGLC with solutions from last
>> IETF meeting consensus. Maybe a second WGLC is needed for more sufficient
>> review.
>> 
>> BR, -Haibin
>> 
>>> -----Original Message----- From: [email protected]
>>> [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of [email protected] 
>>> Sent: Monday, February 04, 2013 4:51 PM To: [email protected] Cc:
>>> [email protected] Subject: [P2PSIP] I-D Action:
>>> draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10.txt
>>> 
>>> 
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Peer-to-Peer Session
>>> Initiation Protocol Working Group of the IETF.
>>> 
>>> Title           : P2P Overlay Diagnostics Author(s)       : Haibin
>>> Song Jiang Xingfeng Roni Even David A. Bryan Filename        :
>>> draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10.txt Pages           : 31 Date
>>> : 2013-02-04
>>> 
>>> Abstract: This document describes mechanisms for P2P overlay
>>> diagnostics.  It defines extensions to the RELOAD P2PSIP base protocol
>>> RELOAD [I-D.ietf-p2psip-base] to collect diagnostic information, and
>>> details the protocol specifications for these extensions.  Useful
>>> diagnostic information for connection and node status monitoring is
>>> also defined.  The document also describes the usage scenarios and 
>>> provides examples of how these methods are used to perform diagnostics
>>> in a P2PSIP overlay networks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: 
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics
>>> 
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at: 
>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10
>>> 
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at: 
>>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: 
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>> 
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