Thank you very much, Marc! I'm sorry that the nits your raised were not addressed. When we update the document, we focused on the main concerns but forgot these tiny nits. Now I'm editing the document offline and wait for the instructions from the chairs.
BR, -Haibin > -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > Marc Petit-Huguenin > Sent: Friday, February 15, 2013 10:06 AM > To: P2PSIP WG > Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10.txt > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA256 > > Section 8 answers my concern about security, although the section will need a > formal schema. AFAIC this draft is ready to be submitted to the IESG. > > I also reviewed the other changes and noticed that most of the nits I > suggested were not applied. In addition I noticed that some references need > an update: > > I-D.zheng-p2psip-diagnose > I-D.ietf-behave-rfc3489bis > I-D.ietf-mmusic-ice > > and perhaps more. > > Globally the whole document still feel like it needs some editing. > > On 02/14/2013 01:30 PM, Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano wrote: > > Hi folks, > > > > Please review the doc, as several changes have been made. If you believe > > it's ready to go, please affirmatively say so. If you believe we need to do > > more review, please say that. > > > > If you find problems, of course we want to hear them. > > > > Thanks, > > > > Brian & Carlos > > > > On Mon, 2013-02-04 at 09:00 +0000, Songhaibin (A) wrote: > >> Hi guys, > >> > >> We have made quite a few changes to the p2psip diagnostics draft, now we > >> believe it has solved the comments from the WGLC with solutions from last > >> IETF meeting consensus. Maybe a second WGLC is needed for more sufficient > >> review. > >> > >> BR, -Haibin > >> > >>> -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] > >>> [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of [email protected] > >>> Sent: Monday, February 04, 2013 4:51 PM To: [email protected] Cc: > >>> [email protected] Subject: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: > >>> draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10.txt > >>> > >>> > >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > >>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Peer-to-Peer Session > >>> Initiation Protocol Working Group of the IETF. > >>> > >>> Title : P2P Overlay Diagnostics Author(s) : Haibin > >>> Song Jiang Xingfeng Roni Even David A. Bryan Filename : > >>> draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10.txt Pages : 31 Date > >>> : 2013-02-04 > >>> > >>> Abstract: This document describes mechanisms for P2P overlay > >>> diagnostics. It defines extensions to the RELOAD P2PSIP base protocol > >>> RELOAD [I-D.ietf-p2psip-base] to collect diagnostic information, and > >>> details the protocol specifications for these extensions. Useful > >>> diagnostic information for connection and node status monitoring is > >>> also defined. The document also describes the usage scenarios and > >>> provides examples of how these methods are used to perform diagnostics > >>> in a P2PSIP overlay networks. > >>> > >>> > >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics > >>> > >>> There's also a htmlized version available at: > >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10 > >>> > >>> A diff from the previous version is available at: > >>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-p2psip-diagnostics-10 > >>> > >>> > >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > >>> > >>> _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing > list > >>> [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip > > > > > > _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing > list > > [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip > > > > > - -- > Marc Petit-Huguenin > Email: [email protected] > Blog: http://blog.marc.petit-huguenin.org > Profile: http://www.linkedin.com/in/petithug > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- > Version: GnuPG v1.4.12 (GNU/Linux) > > iQIcBAEBCAAGBQJRHZgIAAoJECnERZXWan7Eg3UP/3TbamxxlmzLI9ZN9MQijJpL > 7LqsDSTFpK20hlZTj5zXVgI/wBOJVLC3fRmWDXB94NalUiENLQUFxBenXvLvBK+k > 592fp12gR3oZaTblBFcLz/+Dh4v3dj4lXRbAXODBDYN0FbErmDiSGexScKBWpgCc > C3e1WVsk6YCsEWAyAvWn+oBfvV8WQVEyBZUNnLgWzF+gv0FZ6dmVQGoalpWV > BrZE > fjWnL+RTFaXROimHFKSt6XpRVfW5wNDLiDJdlCSWehWz21FOrFthMFejaULsG3Y6 > yNqUkayjhJO39hJDZjP0KGKaQrX4dD8Q2Jezrld0QyudYgcZQmlMjmlb+aYENoDP > Lu5zeXAPXik62/D5dw64eh9htMfd9lOI9bZ8p7FJxPSw2H79hVGCJ9GChGmVE5p1 > kC6tK50K614foVRWpgg9QeuVRhQW4iDJJz+4ItOv7KjpdkR5XbNZyP9TZ28O/J3B > cl00SLUxbl8t8lCj/VpKJ8IEuQmr24HEWZPtOEcYTxIqM6OdBVRRZUgrbcBujKfY > vEQmOQ5x1CRTsz+xUD04+WLItm5z/MF+iMJdBi1HwKf3eJIoiIQauE+W0lGsXrF5 > hrOfgrkSKbWeAxfJB4JYQqOpMH219eaz4K0+1/pb6eUpMRdAj13gWqXshb7ED/1Q > /S+Tg8mEG5dtu1veJ6P6 > =iRZw > -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- > _______________________________________________ > P2PSIP mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
