Barry, Thanks for the review!
On Thu, Jul 31, 2014 at 11:20 AM, Barry Leiba <[email protected]> wrote: > > I've uploaded a new draft of PAWS that I believe addresses all the points > > raised by the ADs, Gen-ART, and at the F2F. > > Vince, thanks so much for the quick work on getting this done. > Essentially all my points have been addressed. I have this ready to > post as a non-blocking, minor comment whenever Pete creates a ballot > for the document: > > ---------------------------------------- > A small point in the header: > "iconectiv (formerly Telcordia Interconnection Solutions)" > I think it's fine to put that in the "Authors' Addresses" section, but > the header should just say "iconectiv". I realize that takes a little > inconvenient massaging of the XML, and probably isn't worth the > trouble for the I-D. Might just put that in an RFC Editor note.... > Done. Added an RFC Editor note. > > -- Section 2.2 -- > As a very minor thing, I suggest this (adding URIs for the agencies, > and specifying "U.S." for FCC): > > OLD > ETSI: European Telecommunications Standards Institute > FCC: Federal Communications Commission > NEW > ETSI: European Telecommunications Standards Institute > <http://etsi.org> > FCC: The U.S. Federal Communications Commission > <http://fcc.gov> > END > > Done. Thanks for the reminder on adding "U.S.". > -- Section 6 -- > As I had concerns in version -12 with the use of JSON schema language > that hasn't been fully specified and is in an expired I-D, I should > explicitly say that I'm happy with what Section 6 and its subsections > look like in version -13. Thanks for the fix! > I'm glad it was rather painless :) > ---------------------------------------- > > Barry > Given that I want to update the IANA language some more, I have another draft ready to upload (incorporating these changes). Should I do that now? -- -vince
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