Hi, Just one quick comment! I remember making this point earlier as well, and if the WG disagrees please let me know!
I am not a fan of the format used by the examples in this I-D (which are in the form of PCEP packet structures) - https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03#section-7.2 It might be useful for someone debugging (well we also have tools that do that way better and show results in a much more friendly way), but not for a general reader of an RFC. You will also note that this is not the usual style followed in the PCE WG document. P2MP RFCs have examples in past, my request would be to follow the same style and not to deviate - https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8623.html#section-6.6 https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8306.html#section-3.10 Thanks! Dhruv (as a WG participant) On Fri, Mar 10, 2023 at 1:19 AM <[email protected]> wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Path Computation Element WG of > the IETF. > > Title : PCEP extensions for p2mp sr policy > Authors : Hooman Bidgoli > Daniel Voyer > Saranya Rajarathinam > Anuj Budhiraja > Tarek Saad > Siva Sivabalan > Filename : draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03.txt > Pages : 44 > Date : 2023-03-09 > > Abstract: > SR P2MP policies are set of policies that enable architecture for > P2MP service delivery. This document specifies extensions to the > Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP) that allow a > stateful PCE to compute and initiate P2MP paths from a Root to a set > of Leaves. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy/ > > There is also an htmlized version available at: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org: > :internet-drafts > > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce >
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