Hi Dhruv

Thanks for comments, I can change it in the next draft.
There was just too many question on how the packet looks like and I felt 
drawing the bytes could help.

Just to ensure you are looking for something like  below:
Note: the questions I am getting is to give a rough view of how the packet 
looks in different cases.

Common header
Lsp object with plsp-id = 1, Root= A, tree-id=y, instance-id = L1
Association object
P2MP SR policy ID with root=A, tree-ID=y
P2MP SR Policy name = “name”
…
CCI with cc-id =x , label 0
              Path-attribute ero-path id =1 , backup-path id =2
              SR-ERO ipv4-addr = NHD1, SID= d1

Etc…

Thanks
Hooman

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Hi,

Just one quick comment! I remember making this point earlier as well, and if 
the WG disagrees please let me know!

I am not a fan of the format used by the examples in this I-D (which are in the 
form of PCEP packet structures)  - 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03#section-7.2
It might be useful for someone debugging (well we also have tools that do that 
way better and show results in a much more friendly way), but not for a general 
reader of an RFC.

You will also note that this is not the usual style followed in the PCE WG 
document. P2MP RFCs have examples in past, my request would be to follow the 
same style and not to deviate -
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8623.html#section-6.6
https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8306.html#section-3.10

Thanks!
Dhruv (as a WG participant)



On Fri, Mar 10, 2023 at 1:19 AM 
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Path Computation Element WG of the 
IETF.

        Title           : PCEP extensions for p2mp sr policy
        Authors         : Hooman Bidgoli
                          Daniel Voyer
                          Saranya Rajarathinam
                          Anuj Budhiraja
                          Tarek Saad
                          Siva Sivabalan
  Filename        : draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03.txt
  Pages           : 44
  Date            : 2023-03-09

Abstract:
   SR P2MP policies are set of policies that enable architecture for
   P2MP service delivery.  This document specifies extensions to the
   Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP) that allow a
   stateful PCE to compute and initiate P2MP paths from a Root to a set
   of Leaves.


The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-sr-p2mp-policy-03


Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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