Being vocal but late:-(

p.3
"VENDOR- INFORMATION-TLV"
seems to have acquired a spurious space which may mean that simple-minded text 
searches fail to find it

s.3
' Information object will act according to the procedures set out in'
'will act' or 'MUST act'?

s.4.1
I note too a possible mismatch of singular and plural

s.4.2
'The standard YANG module MAY be extended to include the
   use of this information and the Enterprise Numbers that the object
   and the TLVs contain.'

object (singular)  - I am uncertain what this is referencing.  The second 
clause reads a litle oddly to me. 

Tom Petch
________________________________________
From: Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>
Sent: 04 July 2024 14:17
To: [email protected]
Cc: pce-chairs; [email protected]
Subject: [Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-vendor-03

Hi WG,

This email starts a 2-weeks working group last call for 
draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-vendor-03.

https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-vendor-03.html

Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed to 
the progression of the draft to RFC, please articulate your concern. If you 
support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and it is 
ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and nits are 
most welcome.

The WG LC will end on Thursday 18 July 2024.

A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the last-call/adoption.

Thanks,
Dhruv & Julien

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