"J. C. O'Connell" wrote:
>
> Took a few shots this weekend at a local inlet at
> Hillsboro beach Florida. Cant decide which one to enlarge.
>
> Camera was a SP1000 with Kodak 100 gold film and exposure of
> 250 @ F8. The jpeg scans are compressed alot to save space.
>
> This one with a Vivitar 35-105 lens at about 40mm:
> http://www.gate.net/~hifisapi/Inlet1s.jpg
>
> This one was with a SMC Takumar 50mm:
> http://www.gate.net/~hifisapi/Inlet2s.jpg
>
> Which is a better composition????
> Be brutally honest, I can handle criticism
> quite well. Anything I could have done to improve them?
I definitely prefer #1. In fact I looked at #2 first, and thought
'what would I have done differently?', and ended up pretty close to
what you have as #1. The one thing I'd have tried to do, as well,
is to lose some of the ground in the foreground, if possible, by
going for a slightly higher vantage point and/or moving forward
slightly.
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