> -----Original Message-----
> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]]On Behalf Of John Francis
> Sent: Monday, January 29, 2001 3:14 PM
> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Subject: Re: Two inlet shots
>
>
> "J. C. O'Connell" wrote:
> >
> > Took a few shots this weekend at a local inlet at
> > Hillsboro beach Florida. Cant decide which one to enlarge.
> >
> > Camera was a SP1000 with Kodak 100 gold film and exposure of
> > 250 @ F8. The jpeg scans are compressed alot to save space.
> >
> > This one with a Vivitar 35-105 lens at about 40mm:
> > http://www.gate.net/~hifisapi/Inlet1s.jpg
> >
> > This one was with a SMC Takumar 50mm:
> > http://www.gate.net/~hifisapi/Inlet2s.jpg
> >
> > Which is a better composition????
> > Be brutally honest, I can handle criticism
> > quite well. Anything I could have done to improve them?
>
>
> I definitely prefer #1. In fact I looked at #2 first, and thought
> 'what would I have done differently?', and ended up pretty close to
> what you have as #1. The one thing I'd have tried to do, as well,
> is to lose some of the ground in the foreground, if possible, by
> going for a slightly higher vantage point and/or moving forward
> slightly.
>
>
Cropping more towards a panaormic aspect seems the best solution.
I could hack a little off the bottom.
JCO
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