Asking for help/critique

[Boris Liberman]

Hi!

I am studying my new F 85/2.8 soft, thanks to Bruce Dayton. Here is a 
picture which I think I just spoiled -

http://www.usefilm.com/image/212782.html

Some of the people who saw it really liked it, but I don't quite like 
it. I think that there is too much light "leaked" through the trees.

I would appreciate it you looked at it and told me what you think. But 
please be honest and if need be brutal. I do want to know how to 
improve it.

Thanks.

Boris