Bruce, I think him looking at her is on the right track. The first shot is very pretty and dreamy, but the body language is wrong. He's looking at us and she's contemplating something. Better is your suggestion of him looking at her looking at the bouquette.
Clearly, the first shot has something positive that the 2nd doesn't. You just need a way around the negative aspect. Regards, Bob S. Bruce Dayton writes: > Thanks for the comments. This type of shot is less typical of what is > shown within the PDML and it seems that there are quite varying > opinions - all equally valid. > > The attempt was to produce a dreamy shot. The soft focus has some > impact as does the pose and setting. In the first image, her not > looking at the camera doesn't bother me, perhaps the real issue there > is that he IS looking at the camera. Both looking or both not. Maybe > if he were looking more at her it would be better. > > The second shot has both with their attention together, which is what > we are most used to. I'm unsure myself as to which I like better. > The couple ordered 8X10's of both, so maybe they couldn't > decide > either.
