Hi Dario ...

So, my first question is, what's the point of the photo?  Is it supposed to
represent two people at opposite political extremes, someone showing
someone else a small item (maybe even using a tiny digicam to take a
picture), or something else?  The problem, you see, is that there's not
enough information to clearly convey the story, whatever it may be. 
Technically it's pretty good, at least as far as exposure and "printing"
goes.  More background detail would provide a sense of place, needed
information, and a canvas upon which the story could be better expressed. 
Moving further back, not cropping so tight, might give us more information
as well, based upon the attire of the people, their stance, or other items
in the scene.

Shel Belinkoff


> [Original Message]
> From: Dario Bonazza <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Date: 5/10/2004 2:49:35 PM
> Subject: PAW02: Vancouver guy
>
> Does anybody from Vancouver know Ray?
> http://www.dariobonazza.com/paw/paw02e.htm
> Comments welcome.
> Ciao,
> Dario


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