Hi Paul,
Good job, but...
I think the added strong contrast in the sky detracts from the more subtle starkness of the wooden buildings, and their lack of color.
The buildings are mainly composed of small high contrast elements and that creates the barren feeling I get looking at them...at the details.
Now, the added sky details draw the eye upward, as a second point of interest.
Not only that, but they are in contrast to the buildings, by being beautiful and soft-looking.
Just my opinion,
keith whaley
Paul Sorenson wrote:
Sorry - I didn't mean to offend anyone by making those changes - just wanted to produce a sample of what another possibility is in BW. I'll take it down w/in 24 hours - sooner if Dave would like.
-P
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"Paul Sorenson" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Or maybe this - played with it a little in PS Elements.
http://home.earthlink.net/~allaround6/images/kinmount3.jpg
Yes, the sky is what it really needs. I considered doing that but thought it might be going a bit too far.
-- Mark Roberts Photography and writing www.robertstech.com
