Thanks for the comments, Keith - I hadn't looked at it quite that way, but
the barren sky in Dave's original does lend itself to the starkness of the
abandoned mill. I can see why he wants to go back after some snowfall and
shoot it from another perspective.
-P
----- Original Message -----
From: "Keith Whaley" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Sent: Monday, November 22, 2004 11:08 AM
Subject: Re: Paw Out of service
> Hi Paul,
>
> Good job, but...
> I think the added strong contrast in the sky detracts from the more
> subtle starkness of the wooden buildings, and their lack of color.
> The buildings are mainly composed of small high contrast elements and
> that creates the barren feeling I get looking at them...at the details.
> Now, the added sky details draw the eye upward, as a second point of
> interest.
> Not only that, but they are in contrast to the buildings, by being
> beautiful and soft-looking.
>
> Just my opinion,
>
> keith whaley
>
> Paul Sorenson wrote:
>
> > Sorry - I didn't mean to offend anyone by making those changes - just
wanted
> > to produce a sample of what another possibility is in BW. I'll take it
down
> > w/in 24 hours - sooner if Dave would like.
> >
> > -P
>
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Mark Roberts" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > Sent: Monday, November 22, 2004 6:11 AM
> > Subject: Re: Paw Out of service
> >
> >
> >>"Paul Sorenson" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >>
> >>>Or maybe this - played with it a little in PS Elements.
> >>>
> >>>http://home.earthlink.net/~allaround6/images/kinmount3.jpg
>
> >>Yes, the sky is what it really needs. I considered doing that but
> >>thought it might be going a bit too far.
> >>
> >>--
> >>Mark Roberts
> >>Photography and writing
> >>www.robertstech.com
>
>
