Hi, Juan ... 

This isn't a very good or interesting photo other for the slightly
intriguing color cast from the lights in the bar.  There's no story - just
a woman sitting at the bar staring off somewhere, no interaction of people
with one another or with the photographer.  The composition is, at best,
mediocre. Frankly, I think it's poor, but I'm sure others will find it to
be to their liking..  The face behind the subjects's face adds nothing to
the photo, and, imo, is a strong distraction and poor compositional
element.  The face at the left edge of the frame does little to add
anything to the picture.

It's quite possible that the greater DOF provided by the istd is a
detriment to what may have been a nice little "bar portrait," adding too
many recognizable distractions to the image.  A softer blur of the
background elements, without losing them completely,  might enhance the
scene.  The somewhat askew angle is nice for this shot, adding some dynamic
to what could have been an other wise very staid photo.  I think this is
certainly one situation in whch a skewed perspective works - but not enuf,
imo, to move this photo from the mundane to the marvelous.  You've done
lots of work that's a lot better.

Shel 


> From: Juan Buhler <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> The beauty of digital--sometimes things work better in color:
>
> http://www.jbuhler.com/blog/archives/00000166.html
>
> ist D, FA35/2, ISO3200, 1/20 at f2


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