Gonz,
Excellent catch! An absolute family treasure.
If I may, I'm not sure I'd leave the blowing hair
under her nose and across her face.
Understandably, the framing seems to want to feature
the disheveled hair, but I'd like to see her a bit
further to the right and looking more into the frame.
I'd have to see it, but I believe the right side could
be slightly cropped without diminishing its impact.
Like the 'color'.

Jack

  
--- Gonz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Been playing around with this one, decided it was
> way too saturated, but 
> B&W did not do it justice, so I settled for
> somewhere in between. 
> Comments, flaming critiques, etc. all welcome.
> 
> http://www.g0nz.com/images/breeze.html
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonz
> 
> 


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