Hi Paul,

You have a lovely daughter, although she looks a little uncomfortable in
this situation.

As a portrait, however, this is far from your best work.  Ingred's eyes
look a little bloodshot, her bra strap is showing, and there seems to be
some artifacting on her nose.  The two highlights in each eye are something
of a distraction as well.  One highlight might be better, yes?  More
traditional in a formal portrait, in any case?

Shel 


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> From: Paul Stenquist 

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