John, Paul, Jim & Rob, thanks for your comments.

John, insect wings are pretty neat. I've got some shots of a dragonfly
and the detail & colour in the wings is amazing.

I agree Paul that more DOF would have been nice, but I was shooting
hand held with natural light so I was forced to keep the shutter speed
well up. I'm not a steady as some :-)

Jim, Rob, I've taken your comments on board and have re-worked it a bit.

The original:

http://www.arach.net.au/~savage/PESO/peso_004.htm

Take 2:

http://www.arach.net.au/~savage/PESO/peso_004_2.htm

Your thoughts?

Again, thanks for taking the time to comment.

Dave S

<snip>

> > Perfect shot.  Focus just right, the wing is magnificent.

> > John

<snip>

> > Nice composition, but I think you need another couple of stops worth of
> > DOF to make it as powerful a shot as it could be. You would at least
> > want both wings in focus. Flash in a diffuser on high-speed synch would
> > be the easiest way to acihieve that.
> > Paul

<snip>

> > I like it... colors, composition, subject. The oof petals in the foreground 
> > might > > have been a bit less "in the way" if they had been burned in a 
> > little.

> > Jim

<snip>

> > Nice image, just needs a hint of warming though I suspect.

> > Rob Studdert

<snip>

> On 27 Mar 2005 at 11:31, David Savage wrote:
>
> > >Happy Easter Guys & Gals,
> > >
> > >It's been awhile since my last PESO, so :
> > >
> > >http://www.arach.net.au/~savage/PESO/peso_004.htm
> > >
> > >These guys are such a PITA to shoot, they don't sit still very long.
> >
> > >Comments & criticisms welcome,

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