Re: PAW: People & Portraits #14

[Keith Whaley]

If you had shifted your camera's position to the left a little, so that 
her profile was even a full inch forward of his would probably been 
okay. As it is, the overlap is visually confusing; the two profiles meld 
and is not "clean."
To have this work, you need two profiles as well as two hand gestures.
Otherwise, it's a fine image. Seriously...

keith whaley
Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote:
On Apr 5, 2005, at 11:53 AM, Frantisek wrote:
http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/14.htm

Great gesture and moment. But the partly visible face behind the man
ruins this photo to me. I see the other hand looks interesting,
perhaps it was your intention, but if so, it doesn't work for me.

The point of the photo was indeed two people's gestures together, seeing 
just enough but not too much of the woman behind the man to react to her 
very different gesture was important.

Godfrey