I understand (some) of your reservations. The photograph is meant to be part of a Camera Club Exibtion (Christmas time) on the Southern Harbour in my home town.
The reason is, that the harbour environment will disappear/change during the next decade: As a city planner, I am the project manager of the renewal project, which will convert this industrial area into new homes, shops, offices, cultural facilities etc. etc. As a camera club member I participate in documenting the facts and atmosphere of this disappearing part of town. The Seagul picture was an attempt to make one of those typical (cliche) "Camera Club Photographs", that I never really bothered to make myself. BTW: A colleague of mine, who has a master degree in arts, suggested I should crop it a bit at the bottom, which I did: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bladt/13683598/ Cheers Jens Bladt mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] http://hjem.get2net.dk/bladt -----Oprindelig meddelelse----- Fra: Boris Liberman [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sendt: 13. maj 2005 08:06 Til: [email protected] Emne: Re: PESO: Geometry with Seagul Hi! > The superstructure atop the middle building is a bit distracting. > Other than that it would be such an austere and simple composition. > > As is, it rather leaves me flat, I'm afraid. I'm not sure if it's a > shot of a bird or of a building or of both. Whatever it is, there's > just not much there to hold my interest, I'm afraid. I must admit I am with (again, duh) you, Frank. So it is the nice looking bird above some rather geometrical looking building... Very well, what's next? I think perhaps Shel might tell - there is no story here... As usual, I don't mean any offense, just my humble opinion. Boris
