The bike was where it was.  The train approaches from the right, from
behind the bike and from where I was standing.

Shel 


> [Original Message]
> From: Boris Liberman 

>
> > http://home.earthlink.net/~scbelinkoff/bikewaiting.html
> > 
> > I was about to round file this one, but decided to post it here to see
what
> > the experts thought of it.  It's just a rough "work print."  Comments
and
> > crits welcome.
>
> Me so thinks me is up to the lesson here. Gentlemen, kind sir Shel :), 
> may I present a question to the honorable assembly? :)
>
> Shel, my first reaction is that the train would come from the left. 
> Which Julia "uhums" in the back. (Uhum means yes :) ). Then of course 
> the bike is on the far left. Which together, at least to my warped 
> morning mind, does not exactly sum up to the "Bike Waiting for a 
> Train"... I'd rather see the bike may be somewhat to the right, or if 
> may be allowed such a harsh word - to the center...
>
> Now, I *don't mean* that as a criticism. I'd rather someone told me if I 
> am right or wrong and why...
>
> Thanks.


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