Hi,

Overall, I very much like the composition and tonality of the photo, bit
the shadow detail is almost completely lacking on my monitor.  Like Paul, I
wonder about the framing.  Could you have gotten more from the shot?

Also, the border that you have around the image detracts from the
presentation.  It's too heavy and too heavy handed.  Something thinner and
simpler is in order.

Shel 




> > Hi all,
> >
> > PAW is almost actually meaning PAW to me again... it's only been two 
> > weeks since my last one ;)
> >
> > As the title implies, this is a photo of a rusty old nail.  The file 
> > is about 90kb...
> >
> > http://www.bluemoon.net.nz/photo/printsdb/view.php?t=PAW&print_id=94
> >
> > As always, comments are welcome.


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