Tim,

I'm very grateful that you did not only watch this picture but also lost some words about it. I wasn't very happy about the image quality, just happy of having caught the moment rather than having not. B&W didn't come to my mind as it is a scan from color film, but I gave it a try and a little crop, I think this really works better:

http://www.vollholz.de/peso/no_fun_bw.html

It's probably a bit harsh, but it is less distracting, I think.
Thank you for your valuable input!

pancho

Tim Øsleby wrote:
The young lady does look like she has had one turn around too much, yes.
The composition does not work for me. I don't find anything to focus my eyes
in this picture. At first it is just a lot of red and white. I believe one
of the reasons is the rather odd (obscure) format.
I also find it hard to rest my eyes at the girl, mainly because of the
distracting background (with the same strong colours, competing with the
object). How about B&W? That might do the trick.
Tim
Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian.)

Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy)


-----Original Message-----
From: pancho hasselbach [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: 2. juli 2005 20:18
To: [email protected]
Subject: PESO: no fun

Hi,

I saw this young lady some weeks ago when I was in Wetzlar, the next town to Giessen which is where I live

http://www.vollholz.de/peso/no_fun.html
(taken with FA 43 Ltd on superia 100)

For those who don't know, Wetzlar is the home of Leica :-)

There are some points in the photo I'm not really happy with, apart from focus (which does not always matter as I understood) it's the framing. I find the pole on the lower left distractive, but I didn't want to cut off from the sun.

Anyway, it was catch it or leave it and I think I caught.
Comments welcome!

pancho








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