Just got home, so I read your post now.
IMHO. It's much better now. In B&W it tells a story.

Tim
Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian.)

Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds 
(Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy)


-----Original Message-----
From: pancho hasselbach [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] 
Sent: 6. juli 2005 23:38
To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: PESO: no fun

Tim,

I'm very grateful that you did not only watch this picture but also lost 
some words about it.
I wasn't very happy about the image quality, just happy of having caught 
the moment rather than having not.
B&W didn't come to my mind as it is a scan from color film, but I gave 
it a try and a little crop, I think this really works better:

http://www.vollholz.de/peso/no_fun_bw.html

It's probably a bit harsh, but it is less distracting, I think.
Thank you for your valuable input!

pancho

Tim Øsleby wrote:
> The young lady does look like she has had one turn around too much, yes. 
> 
> The composition does not work for me. I don't find anything to focus my
eyes
> in this picture. At first it is just a lot of red and white. I believe one
> of the reasons is the rather odd (obscure) format. 
> 
> I also find it hard to rest my eyes at the girl, mainly because of the
> distracting background (with the same strong colours, competing with the
> object). How about B&W? That might do the trick. 
> 
> Tim
> Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian.)
> 
> Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds 
> (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy)
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: pancho hasselbach [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] 
> Sent: 2. juli 2005 20:18
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: PESO: no fun
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I saw this young lady some weeks ago when I was in Wetzlar, the next 
> town to Giessen which is where I live
> 
> http://www.vollholz.de/peso/no_fun.html
> (taken with FA 43 Ltd on superia 100)
> 
> For those who don't know, Wetzlar is the home of Leica :-)
> 
> There are some points in the photo I'm not really happy with, apart from 
> focus (which does not always matter as I understood) it's the framing. I 
> find the pole on the lower left distractive, but I didn't want to cut 
> off from the sun.
> 
> Anyway, it was catch it or leave it and I think I caught.
> Comments welcome!
> 
> pancho
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 






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