The idea is pretty good. But I can't help thinking you rushed this a bit too much. There is something with the body language. It is somewhere between relaxed (this would have made an ironic look), and tense (a bit more dramatic). Being either relaxed or tense makes the shoot fall between two chairs, IMO.
Another thing is that the jewellery isn't very visible. So I'm not sure about the commercial effect. I do like the reflections in the glasses, that's cool. BTW. I find myself being in much more critical than usual today. Wonder why? Tim Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian) Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy) > -----Original Message----- > From: Paul Stenquist [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: 23. oktober 2005 20:49 > To: [email protected] > Subject: PESO: A nervous shoot > > I shot another pic for a jewelry ad today. It's a low-budget operation, > so I did it without permits or permissions. When you see the subject, > you'll know why it made both me and the model a bit nervous. Her fiance > held up a big sign that said PHOTO SHOOT, and we worked very fast. But > I did manage to get off about a dozen shots, and I'm happy with the > results. The first one is probably quite a bit better for the ad. The > second one might be more fun. All with the *istD and the FA50/1.4, ISO > 400, f5.6@ !/90th. > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3822906&size=lg > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3822917&size=lg >
