Jack Davis wrote:
Peter,
Very nice full blossom! Absolutely obvious why you chose it to capture.
Only one minor pedal flaw which could be easily fixed.
The crop you chose is understandable, but I don't think the lower leaf
is worth the imbalance necessary to include it.
The areas of glare and/or bakah at the top are very distracting. IMO if
you can PS them away in some way, it would be a definite improvement.
If you have an option to re-shoot it, a slight angle change would be
worth trying.
Hi Jack,
Many thanks for the suggestions. Unfortunately the bloom itself is long
gone, but I'll have a further play with Picture Window Pro and see if I
can get those top areas a little more subdued, and I'll also try some
different crops. Nothing ventured, nothing gained! :-)
Ciao,
Peter in Sydney
