Shel Belinkoff wrote:
Hi Doug ...
I understand what you're saying, but I'm not sure that I agree with you.
There are a couple of things on the right, though small, that balance the
composition - they are story elements which have to be there in order to
make the pic work on the level intended.
Good catch though, and I'll certainly think more about your comments ...
Shel
"You meet the nicest people with a Pentax"
Looking at it again, I think what bothers me is the inclusion of the
bush at the top of the flag. This creates a very heavy line that, at
least to my mind, overpowers the right-hand elements and pushed the eye
up and out to the left.
But like I said, it's a good idea and I like the expression. I just
don't think it's quite there.
