Dan,

I like what you are trying to do here.  This type of shot is quite
tricky.  My feeling is that the sun flair at the top is just a little
too strong.  It really draws my eye there, when I'm thinking that the
boat and reflection are really the more important elements.  Possibly
a different framing putting the boat near the top of the scene and
just the sun reflection in the foreground would be stronger.

-- 
Best regards,
Bruce


Thursday, March 2, 2006, 9:17:15 AM, you wrote:

DJM> This is a snap that I grabbed last week in Key West, FL, at
DJM> thenightly "sunset celebration" at Mallory Square.  I was just
DJM> trying tocapture the feeling of the event.
DJM> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4178034
DJM> Comments, suggestions, and especially constructive criticism are welcome.
DJM> Dan M

 

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