IMHO, the shot originally posted is the most dramatic, but it needs 'something' to make it completely successful. Eliminating the green cast would be a modest start. I feel It's an image that's worth some more effort.
Jack --- "Daniel J. Matyola" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I cropped the shot four different ways, emphasizing different > aspectof the scene. The variations are here: > http://www.photo.net/photodb/folder.tcl?folder_id=577850 > Comments are welcome. > (I think I still like the one with the sun at the top, #1, best.) > Dan M > On 3/2/06, Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:> Dan,>> I > like what you are trying to do here. This type of shot is quite> > tricky. My feeling is that the sun flair at the top is just a > little> too strong. It really draws my eye there, when I'm thinking > that the> boat and reflection are really the more important elements. > Possibly> a different framing putting the boat near the top of the > scene and> just the sun reflection in the foreground would be > stronger.>> --> Best regards,> Bruce>>> Thursday, March 2, 2006, > 9:17:15 AM, you wrote:>> DJM> This is a snap that I grabbed last week > in Key West, FL, at> DJM> thenightly "sunset celebration" at Mallory > Square. I was just> DJM> trying tocapture the feeling of the event.> > DJM> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4178034> DJM> > Comments, suggestions, and especially constructive criticism are > welcome.> DJM> Dan M>>>> > > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com
