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From: "Tom C"
Subject: GESO - Foggy Morning
Foggy Ridge (from home)
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327774&size=lg
Nice composition, no shadow detail.
That would be a hard shot to do in one exposure.
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Forest 1
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327779
The light is gorgeous, but the picture falls flat. I keep looking for a
center of interest, and don't find one.
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Forest 2
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327776
Same as 1. I like the symmetry. I think I'd try to burn down that sky a
bit., and maybe dodge the background fog a touch.
And it needs shadow detail.
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Forest 3
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327775
Light's gone. No magic left.
It's just a foggy background now.
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Forest 4
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327772
More shadow detail, and you should have been a couple of feet to the left.
And burn down the top right corner.
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Forest 5
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327828
I like the composition, it would be better in black and white, and better
still on 4x5.
There isn't enough shadow detail.
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Aspens
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4327773
I would have walked right past that, and not even seen it.
Thanks for looking.
Are you sure?
William Robb
