> >I wonder if compositionally this image works... Please be > brutal but honest. > > > >http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=13083 > >
For me it's almost, but not quite. There are 2 centres of attention. The first thing my eye is drawn to is the large rock in the lower right quadrant - it's on an intersection of thirds, more or less. My eye is then caught by the woman, more as a distraction than a strong element of the composition. I feel that it would be improved compositionally if she'd had the good sense to contemplate sitting on the rock, or if you had placed her on the intersection of 3rds. The diagonals, the light, the colour and the textures are very good though, as is the idea. Bob
