> Explaining to us what you wanted to do might also help you to evaluate
> the photograph less subjectively, and that way you might be able to
> help yourself discover how to improve.
I guess I was trying to capture the vinyards and the lake beyond, with
the flowers in the foreground. I thought it would be interesting to take
the shot through the slots in the banister.
> In what ways do you think it could have been better?
I really wish that truck hadn't driven up when I was setting up the shot.
I also think that the wood slats of the banister (this shot was taken
on a deck) make it look a busy. Either the flowers or the wood planks
have to go.
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