It will be good to hear from others to see how they feel.  FWIW, I
like the elements that seem to bother you.  I have shot those
mountains without nothing around them and there is no perspective to
get a feel for them.  They just look like a mountain of some sort.

Thanks for your candid comments.

-- 
Bruce


Wednesday, January 3, 2007, 10:24:23 AM, you wrote:

ft> On 1/3/07, Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>> Standing down in the flat valley really gives these mountains a sense
>> of power.  Taken in Utah.
>>
>> Pentax K10D, A 70-210/4, Handheld
>> ISO 100, 1/350 sec @ F/11
>>
>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/snow2006_01.htm
>>

ft> I'm not sure that I'm as thrilled with this one as I am with most of
ft> your other work, Bruce.

ft> A couple of things that bother me:

ft> 1)  The tree in the mid-ground on the left is about the same apparent
ft> height as the mountain - it lessens the impact of the massiveness of
ft> the mountain, IMHO.

ft> 2)  The dark tree in the foreground seems to be "touching" the tree
ft> mentioned in point one.  I'm distracted from the main subject
ft> (presumabely the mountain) as I ascertain what tree is which. I don't
ft> mind photos in which there's a lot going on, but with this one, all
ft> this only takes away from the impact of the main subject, without
ft> adding any meaningful narrative.

ft> 3)  The dark trunk upper left is a distraction.

ft> But, maybe it's just me...

ft> cheers,
ft> frank


ft> -- 
ft> "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept."  -Henri Cartier-Bresson




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