I like the subject/composition but there are several things detracting from 
this one.
Along the bottom there are several distracting bits - LH corner, center 
right of main stem & RH corner - a horizontal crop eliminating these would 
improve the image.
Also along the LH edge are some out of focus twigs that need to be removed.

Just wondering why you chose B+W ?

Kenneth Waller

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Bob Sullivan" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: Re: PESO - Cattail


> Bruce,
> A bit different view and a nice one.  I like the graceful curve below
> the seeds about to be scattered.  I don't know how I feel about the
> Black & White.  Does it work in color?
> Regards,  Bob S.
>
> On 1/24/07, Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>> Taken on walk.
>>
>> Pentax K10D, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6, handheld
>> ISO 200, 1/3000 sec @ f/8
>>
>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4279bw.htm
>>
>> Comments welcome
>>
>> --
>> Bruce


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