Hello Kenneth,

I'll revisit with your suggestions and see what I think.  Sounds like
I should post the color one for you to compare.  I felt that the
seeding coming apart was better portrayed in B&W.

Thanks for looking and suggesting.

-- 
Bruce


Thursday, January 25, 2007, 9:53:42 AM, you wrote:

KW> I like the subject/composition but there are several things detracting from
KW> this one.
KW> Along the bottom there are several distracting bits - LH corner, center
KW> right of main stem & RH corner - a horizontal crop eliminating these would
KW> improve the image.
KW> Also along the LH edge are some out of focus twigs that need to be removed.

KW> Just wondering why you chose B+W ?

KW> Kenneth Waller

KW> ----- Original Message ----- 
KW> From: "Bob Sullivan" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
KW> Subject: Re: PESO - Cattail


>> Bruce,
>> A bit different view and a nice one.  I like the graceful curve below
>> the seeds about to be scattered.  I don't know how I feel about the
>> Black & White.  Does it work in color?
>> Regards,  Bob S.
>>
>> On 1/24/07, Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>>> Taken on walk.
>>>
>>> Pentax K10D, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6, handheld
>>> ISO 200, 1/3000 sec @ f/8
>>>
>>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4279bw.htm
>>>
>>> Comments welcome
>>>
>>> --
>>> Bruce





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