Thanks, Marne. Yesterday, after scanning, I checked the bottom edge to
see if the scanner had cropped the bottom a bit, but found it hadn't.
IOW, I agree.
I got an off-list critique which included the suggestion that the
shadow might be too strong. I considered the shadow to be a major
element, and found the camera needed a higher angle to give it a form I
liked.
This slide has gone back into its secondary storage crypt where it is
likely to spend eternity. 
These comments may read like a criticism of your remarks..they're NOT.
Sincerely appreciate and value your thoughts.

Jack
--- [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

> In a message dated 2/1/2007 6:40:29 A.M. Pacific  Standard Time, 
> [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
> So you'll know where I am on this,  I consider it sort of a playful
> attempt at "cute". The form of the mouth, its  total stance and
> shadow I
> find pleasing. FTR, I don't feel it's a 'strong'  image.
> I have absolutely no emotional investment in it and guarantee that 
> I'll
> find no comment offensive. Just curious as to what it may elicit.
> It  won't come up again.
> 
> Jack
> --- Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  wrote:
> 
> > Sorting through some secondary slide storage, I came across  this
> and
> > found that I still consider some of its shapes  pleasing.
> > Guess it doesn't matter where you find them.
> > 
> >  Jack
> > 
> > Comments welcome!
> > 
> >  http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=217
> 
> ============
> Oh,  in that case... ;-)
> 
> The bottom edge of the creamer is too close to the  bottom edge of
> the 
> picture. 
> 
> Actually, I feel this MIGHT be an  interesting subject and
> background, but I 
> don't think you got the best angle on  it. Something a little closer,
> a little 
> lower down, or something, I feel could  have made it cuter.
> 
> Marnie aka Doe :-)  
> 
> 
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