Hmm. It's a bit literal for me. The framing is too balanced, the  
rendering very "normal" ... it's a man and a woman, and he's pointing  
out something which is out of the field of view.

I'd unbalance it a little bit by cropping and render it a little more  
strongly, I think. It's probably best as part of some kind of set/ 
portfolio rather than just as a standalone image.

G

On Feb 13, 2007, at 9:10 AM, Bruce Dayton wrote:

> I am quite undecided on this shot.  I wanted to post it here to see
> what you all think of it.
>
> Pentax K10D, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6, Handheld
> ISO 200, 1/500 sec @ f/8
>
> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4294.htm


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