The second is much improved over the original, both in composition and exposure.
Bill -----Original Message----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Bruce Dayton Sent: Tuesday, February 13, 2007 1:25 PM To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List Subject: Re: PESO - Over There Based on several comments, I have done a little bit of change to the shot. Along with which version you prefer, I would still wonder generally about the shot - is it worth the bother and effort beyond a learning exercise? New version: http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4294a.htm Original version: http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4294.htm -- Thanks, Bruce Tuesday, February 13, 2007, 9:56:30 AM, you wrote: pcn> I find it interesting. There's activity that invokes ideas. pcn> It's sharp and well detailed. Nicely composed. You might try a pcn> slightly tighter crop that eliminates open area on the right and pcn> above the figures. I think that if the people were postiioned pcn> more to the right of frame, the "over there" concept might come pcn> through more powerfully. pcn> Paul pcn> -------------- Original message ---------------------- pcn> From: Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >> I am quite undecided on this shot. I wanted to post it here to see >> what you all think of it. >> >> Pentax K10D, Tokina AT-X 400/5.6, Handheld >> ISO 200, 1/500 sec @ f/8 >> >> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4294.htm >> >> Comments welcomed >> >> -- >> Bruce >> >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
