A definite improvement. Is there a way to bring down the brightness of the ground a bit?
Rick --- Godfrey DiGiorgi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Thanks for all the comments ... I did some localized > adjustments to > the tonal curves on faces and details, added a > little blur to the > upper portion of the background, etc. Can't do much > about the > cropping as that's about all I could get in given > all the foliage and > other junk that surrounded everything in this little > 'zoo'. And with > an ultrawide lens too... ! > > If you have the moment, please take another look. > :-) > > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/07.htm > > Godfrey > > --- > > Well composed, but the busy background detracts. > Of course that's > > what was there, but, nevertheless, it brings it > down a notch IMO. > --- > > I like this one a lot but would be happier if you > could try to > > lighten just > > the faces a bit. > --- > > I was going to say it looks like a good silloette, > but i'd probably > > mis spell it, so i won't > --- > > The subject is today's winner of the "Stranger > Than > > Fiction" award. > > > > The photo needs more detail in the figures. Not > that > > I know how to get it there; the only statue of > Charles > > Dickens in North America is a block away, and > while > > very nice to look at, its dark bronze has been > > impossible to photograph well. > --- > > How do I join this band?? ;-) > > > > I would prefer a bit more space to the left - the > most distant > > 'musician' needs more room in front of him. > --- > > Cool photo Godfrey! Yes, I'd prefer a touch more > > space all around I think... but of course I don't > know > > what you cropped out. > --- > > Lovely wide angle feel; 21mm really is plenty if > one has an eye. > > I'd like more detail in the drummer's face, > though. > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > http://www.photo.net/photos/RickW ____________________________________________________________________________________ TV dinner still cooling? Check out "Tonight's Picks" on Yahoo! TV. http://tv.yahoo.com/ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
