I'll present a little different take on it. I'm not meaning to to be negative or critical.
Overall I found the series of photos to be quite enjoyable. That is, I liked seeing them and I think all the photos work well together as a photo essay of sorts. When I look at each single image though, I wonder if they have the strength to stand individually. Photo #1 still needs to get rid of the distracting background in the lower right. Photo #2 I like but the closer branches in the upper right are distracting. I like photos #4 and #6 because they really have a two-fold point of interest. So my overall impression is positive when viewing the images as a group, but less so when I look at each individual photo. Hopefully unjudgemental and honest, albeit subjective. Tom C. >From: Adam Maas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >Reply-To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> >To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> >Subject: Re: GESO: 2007 - Winter, Trees - GDG >Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2007 23:14:48 -0500 > >Excellent series. It's the sort of stark nature abstract that really >appeals to me. > >The second is probably the strongest. > >-Adam > > >Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: > > The theme of my PAW 08 photograph continued to bump around in my > > head. The abstraction has to me something of the feel of etchings or > > scrimshaw. I liked how the first presented a very simple composition > > and told a quiet, small story. > > > > So here are 7 more in a gallery presentation with Autoviewer: > > > > http://www.gdgphoto.com/wintertree/ > > > > Comments, critique, and the fast flung tomatoes are always appreciated. > > > > Godfrey > > > > >-- >PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >[email protected] >http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
