----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Kenneth Waller"
Subject: Re: PESO - Falling Water


>> You're joking again right Ken?  :-)
>
> No, Tom, I'm not. The beige rock in the ULH corner keeps pulling my eye 
> away
> from the action in the LRH corner. Yes there's falling water but the
> patterns aren't in harmony with each other.
>
>>From your description, it sounds like a scene that I might have enjoyed by
> just looking at it.

I wonder if this one wouldn't work better in black and white? The beige rock 
is distracting, because of it's colour. I'm not sure I think there is too 
much going on in the picture, though cropping just below the offending 
coloured rock does strengthen the image.
Cropping the bottom to make the picture square makes a different and very 
strong picture as well.

I like the picture overall, but I am also seeing a couple of strong pictures 
within it.

William Robb 


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