Brutal and honest - for me, this one does not quite work. Three things, I think. First, the highlight/shadow on her face is just too harsh - if you could lighten the dark side enough to get a good hint of her eye that would help. Second, where she is placed in the frame is just a little extreme - head all the way to top right and then a strong diagonal of the body, just comes out looking odd for me. Third, the general pose is strange. It appears that she may be spinning her body around and you catching her mid-spin. It makes her head almost look detached or something - anyway the body part is odd and unflattering to me.
Now I am viewing this as somewhat a portrait so your intent may be very different. I will be interested to know what others think. I could see this as an image that provokes like or dislike with little middle ground. -- Bruce Friday, March 9, 2007, 10:39:30 AM, you wrote: BL> Hi! BL> http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=16946&full=1 BL> As usual, brutal and honest comments are sought after. BL> Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
