Hi Tim,

My view of all three shots are that they're somewhat interesting because of the weather. I did not find any of them to be good images, in either the photographic or art sense.

If you really like these birds as a subject, I would suggest studying the images, taking into account the critical feedback received, and returning to work the subject again at a future time.

With wildlife and bird shots, having the subjects in sharp, crisp focus is a prerequisite, and none of these were.

A parallel thread that's been going on is the need to critically examine and edit one's images. I sense that while seeing these birds first hand in those condtions was exciting, that the images lack what you really were hoping to capture.

I don't think it works standalone and I would not use it as part of a series.

Sincerely and friendly-like,

Tom C.

From: "Kenneth Waller" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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Subject: Re: PESO - Heavy Weather 3
Date: Thu, 10 May 2007 19:34:10 -0400

It would have more impact on me if the foreground birds weren't merging into
the black rocks.

Thumbsdown.

Kenneth Waller

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From: "Tim Øsleby" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: PESO - Heavy Weather 3


> One more. Less subtile this time. From a technical point of view this is
> better, but IMO this has less impact.
> http://foto.no/cgi-bin/bildegalleri/vis_bilde.cgi?id=309366
>
> Whatdoyoathink? As stand alone, and as part of the series?
>
> Tim Typo
> Mostly Harmless


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