Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: >On Dec 10, 2007, at 10:11 AM, Mark Roberts wrote: > >>>> http://www.robertstech.com/pages/fotoblog/7d006506.htm > >Hmm. This one is not so successful to me. Too many static elements >outside of the primary subject area, and the color balance is too >warm overall for me to be totally happy. > >I think it would be more successful with a tighter crop, cutting out >that protective gate in the lower foreground and the right side up to >somewhere between the first and second horse. That would focus my >attention on the moving elements against the signage and the faces. > >I'd also be happier with a warm tone B&W rendering, it would fit the >mood of the photo better.
Hmm, I don't like the idea of cropping it at all; it just seems to "crowded" when I try that. But I think I will have a go at the color balance (or "colour" balance, since this shot is from London!) and taming the tungsten & neon lighting. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
