2009/4/9 Bong Manayon <[email protected]>:
> Hi Jostein,
>
> I like my portraits tight, but I think this is too tight...I would
> like to see the other eye :-)
>
> Or, if for artistic reasons or whatever that you only have to work
> with one eye, I would frame a little more to the left; more of the
> cheeks less of the nose and the eye a bit on the right of the frame.
> But that's me...

Thanks, Bong. I see your point about the nose becoming too dominant.
I'll remember that if I get another go. I have no artistic reasons
behind this image... When it comes to portraits I'm a total newbie, so
any and all constructive advice is most welcome.

The shot was made during a boat trip two days ago, to the seabird
colonies at Farne Islands (UK). That's why I had the 300mm on the
camera in the first place. It was a fairly bumpy ride, so framing this
subject was quite an interesting exercise.

The cormorants out there were a lot easier to photograph, actually.

Jostein

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