Hi Jostein: I agree with Bong about the too tight focus. Also, I don't
know if it's shadows or what, but it looks like there's a rash around your
subjects mouth, which, well, doesn't seem to flatter him that well. HTH.
Cheers, Christine
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Sent: Wednesday, April 08, 2009 4:46 PM
Subject: PESO - portrait of a young man
Gang,
On unfamiliar ground here. Human portrait in b/w...
http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/displayimage.php?pos=-189
As Boris would say, please be brutal...
Best,
Jostein
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